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Old 02-17-04, 05:36 PM   #8
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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the chronz
you verse was, a little wierd,
you wasnt consistwant, you had some good lines an some bad lines.
Your good lines were you setups, but you never actually followed through an hit with the punch, none of your still hit hard really, but certain lines in my eyes showed talent in your verse just kep it up an elevate.


illynice
you first few lines were really wack, after that you pulled your shit together, an came with some alright lines, an then atbthe end you fell of again. you win this battle but only just, because your setups led to punches, an your punches hit, which seperates yours from the chronz's

peace
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