freeman
Oakley son, My verse is like the sun.. So a hope your UV protected
Burning through your retinas...
... Leaving your eyeballs dissected
not too bad, 5/10
Silly mother fucker.. This kids right here starts beef with sig makers
Talking so much shit...
... Over him id believe the newspapers
could of been worded better, 5/10
Kid you dont compare.. Your just an artist stuck without a brush
Its like ive got 4 Aces...
... And you got a low flush
not really a punch, 4/10
Have you running out.. Leave this bitch fleein like a coward
Im plugged into the mains...
... While your just battery powered
again just filler, 4/10
Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
ok personal, 6/10
overall
25/50
oakley
Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
second line was good, 5/10
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
nice wordplay, an wittyness, 7/10
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
nice setup, didnt pull it off, 4/10
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion(sig)
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
not too bad, 6/10
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...(sig)
nice personal, best bar of battle, 7/10
overall
29/50
both y'all please dont be bitches an vote on this
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