you know what this was pretty tight....i like how you used the phoenix as your reference....your lines were like poetry...."Crystal-like feathers that deviate light like a prism
Born witha burden, sworn to alleviate the pain from within em"....i like that one......it was kinda shakey at the very end though...."His talon grips the cliff as it looks upon the world
One last glimpse, now ready, It's body it hurls"...it didnt quit flow......but this was still nice.......(RETURN THE FAVOR AND HIT A LINK IN MY SIG)

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