Why is this being slept on.??
Ok this was a very I mean a very good piece..
This piece had a lot of imagery...
Like Penskills pieces they always have me picture
something this piece did as well..The thought and emotions
were like whoa...You are a good poet..I never peeped your
pieces keep it up family...Nice the way you typed Blue for you
and pink for the girl....Nice

My favorite lines was: "drawn into her beauty, each kiss getting hotter
the sweet taste of her tounge

"Like a passionate wine dancing through my veins
soft music drifting through my ears on this night of love
beneath the lamp light out in the rain's gentle touch
twirling within passion and warmed by her smile
it is a night of magical mystery
listening to the whispers of the trees
trapped within glances trying to catch the eye of Aeries"
very nice opener keep it up ..

Peace