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New to RB
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IP:
some of this was confusing sum of the punches were played and made no sense it looks like you used similes but you more complex ones cuz sum of them were simple other than that it was alright and you need to battle this blunted kid
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I smiled at the devil  as his sweat pounded the ground and left burnt black marks on the path as he walked towards me with crimson-like skin and universal black horns and as he reached for my lifeless corpse a black-robed figure that was hard to discern whispered to me "Your days are numbered".
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