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LM
Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
Nice opener... Straight to the point... Lol... 6/10
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
Very hard hittin personal... 8/10
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
Not feelin it to be honest... 4/10
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
Nice enough... 5/10
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
Good personal... 7/10
Overall... 31/50... Structure was good... Vocabulary wasnt bad... Flow was good... Punches where good... And some nice personals in there aswell... Good verse... Pz...
Fiorz
Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
Good opener... Good punch... 8/10
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
Not bad... Played... But not bad... 6/10
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
What? 4/10
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
Not feelin it... 5/10
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
Badly worded... Self-glorification... 5/10
Overall... 28/50... Structure wasnt bad... Vocabulary was iight... Flow was off at times... Some iight punches... Some pointless shit... Not many personals... Decent verse... Pz...
v/ LM...
Punches hit harder... Less played... More consistent verse...
Both drop a vote here please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...020#post1193020
Thanks...
Pz...
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