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Here's your feedback...
First verse...
Nice flow... Good concepts and ideas in it aswell... Makes you think "What If"... Lol...
Second Verse...
Nice multi... Same as first verse aswell... Flow, concepts and so on... Nice last line aswell...
Third Verse...
Nice closer... Ended it quite nicely... Same as first two verses in all other aspects...
Overall...
Nice consistent verses... Good use of vocabulary, flow, concepts and ideas, structure...
Wasnt feeling the colours though... Dont do that next time...
Maybe a stronger ending could of been used... Just to of left us thinking "What If"...
Wierd sort of thing really... Contradicting yourself each line... Worked though...  ...
Keep it up...
Hit this up for me please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...020#post1193020
Thanks...
Pz...
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