1st man=your off a little on your flow but lyrically it's good, your rimes and your multi's are dope men, your refrain is pretty good, simple and catchy

2nd man=your lyric really need to be reworked.....also your rime are simple and lacking at some places, your flow wasn't consistent....at places it was dope and other you lost it

3rd man=lacking emotions.....men I can't feel ya.....your too monotone men, not feelin ya.......your flow was aiightbut lyrically you could do better, check your sound at places we have trouble hearing beat

plz return favor
thxs
peace
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