ok heres my though:

Very good read. Never was an effort it flowed well and was onpoint. My thoughts throught out were it was a played subject till the last verse and it really well came togther as quiet a good piece. You attack the subject well and on the end the victim seemed the victor in the sence which provioded a nice twist. Like drop like this where there is a bit of thought used . Good work .

plz return the fev if u can
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