Beat 1 - not bad for first beat, sounds kinda empty tho, like it needs something, sequence wise, you sound like you know where things go and everything, so keep up the good work

Beat 2 - yea your right this one is better than the first, your improving , this one feels less empty, could use a nice bassline and would be better. Kepp up the progress.

hit my new beat up please

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