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Old 02-18-04, 12:16 AM   #10
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
Played out first line..second was Ok
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
kinda played..but ok
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
stretched bar...kinda weak
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
blah
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
nice
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
played
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
so much nothing... like in your verse the contence off -ill
ok


Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
decent
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
good
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
weak and stretched
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
just ok
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
ok...kinda weak tho
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
played
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
ok...kinda weak/played
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
wasn't feelin it
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
ok closer

This was a close battle...but I gotta give this to Breth...Eki came with too many played lines..Like the whole Janet Jackson nipple thing is so played out already

PLease drop an honest vote here...I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114158