Marvelis-

cool choice of beat...
the vocal effects were kinda gay... less reverb man
are you black? cuz you shouldnt say "nigga" if you arent!!! lol
decent metaphors... pretty general though. nothin personal

Krem-

ROFL the intro was funny!!! "I had computer problems... bitch" ROFL
nice beat...
your vocal effects were okay... better then marvelis
need better punches... better lyrics... and dont say "sorry i was late"

DONT EVER apologize in a battle!!!

Vote: Marvelis

and this was not a good battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 you both need to elevate