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Old 02-18-04, 12:34 AM   #7
Brethren
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Celestial:

Try’d to TAG along…
…..but skill is a bump in the road n his car broke down
Cuz kid face it..
...even if ya voting ring was back u couldnt win this now
If lying is dope? well then be honest, u always been true
watch me take V..&..V...
….attach those two toghether & ill take that letter too!
Chump change like poverty pay checks, wack lyrics = worthless
Please..when my piles itch is only time u scratch my surface
Homicide done wit eas.. left on the ground like carpet flees
Strip this imitation faster than 5 year old boys...
....playing with Fake Barbies
supposed to learn from mistakes...
..........but look at ya sig, u back at it agian now
& play time is over...
....so say bye bye to IJL cuz u just got kicked out!

Didn't really like the V & V line, barbies line was dopeness, mainly personals, the bump in the road line was pretty nice also.

Lyric:


Every Crew your in self destructs, First D.O.I. and now Wits End's delirious
Celesial lost his Dialect, Even Verbal Kent said yall can't contend serious
Celestial I dun Envy your Skillz, in fact none of ya aliases do
Had to battle Chrit as Slik Shadow, just so he'd aknowledge you
You think your a Celestial being? Get ya head outta da clouds ya fake
Cause with the whackness you come with...
...Got declined from the gates for heaven's sake
You aint talented linguistically cause you literally shot ya mouth off
No ability to talk...
...I de-feeted you so you can't walk the walk
Your flow and spits off...coming with nothing but played ass rhymes
Cause only fuckin reatards...
...Shoot for the moon, but get sonned all the time

Good wordplay, heaven's sake line was dope as fuck, de-feeted line was played as fuck. Shoot for the moon line was alright, but cold've made that line dope as fuck.

Punches: Lyric, just by a hair
Wordplay: Lyric, i didn't like the V & V line at all
Personals: Celestial, mainly his whole verse
Multis: Neither, no multis
Opener: Tie, Celestial had a nice personal, but so did Lyric
Closer: Tie, Celestial had a personal, Lyric had a wordplay

Vote - Lyric

Very close battle, but I have to go with Lyric because of better wordplay, the rest of your guy's stuff was nearly the same in both verses. Advice, flip some damn multis.
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