Im going to be as honest as possible for you...and I hope you will return the favor by hittin up one of the links in my signature...preferably a battle.....but any way this is my opinion.......this verse was just okay....It doesnt seem like you writting with the best of your ability...when i read this it felt like alot of it was just thrown together just to rhyme with the last line...like....."Spit like a watch, it's time afta time"...you gotta come iller than that dawg.....i think this was your best line though...."Produce all my words wit an incredible speed"...but forreal thats not saying a whole lot to be honest because i've heard lines like that before....but it seems like you have an above average vocabulary...so use that strength..but dont use it in a the wrong way "Then my words hit ur head with a prolific sting"....i'll peep your next open mic though......im out...

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