niceness here.....very rarely do i reply to an open mic....but this deserves some recognition.....u had nice flow and multis......good vocab....and showed great emotion, imagery, and concepts of thought.....
Best Line Of Verse:
Quote:
Originally Posted by TiLLEyEDiE
Blacks Complain Abot Discriminating Whites
Yet They Do It Everytime We Pick Up A Mic
Do They Think Its Funny Or They Picking a Fight?
No This Asian Aint Hatin So Face It
Didnt You Know 7/10 Blacks Are Racist
Not All, So Dont Get It Twisted Or Bent Man
I Have No Room To Hate Love Is What I Sent Man
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^nice thoughtful questions and facts.....good emotion...and good to see pride in ur race...
Key:
poor = 1
ok = 2
good = 3
very good = 4
excellent = 5
BREAKDOWN
Emotion - Very Good
Multis - Good
Vocab - Very Good
Concepts - Excellent
Resources - Excellent
Flow - Very Good
RhymeScheme - Excellent
Overall - very good drop without a doubt.......ur hook was emotional.....ur verses showed thought and good points and good questions....
Rating
9/10
peace