Hmmmm...

Beat 1
The Strings Are Kinda Irritating, But Its Aight...
The Drums Should Be A Little Louder, And Incorporate A Harder Snare...
The Shaker Is Nice...And So Is That JazzyRhodes Piano Thing...
Other Than That...The Beat Is Kinda...Bland...Needs A Little...

Beat 2
Ahhh...Its A Little Too Slow...Speed It Up A Little...Maybe, 100 BPM...
Once Again, Make The Drumline Louder, And Make The Snare More Hard...
Also, Add A Bassline...Better Than Your First, But Still A Little Empty...

You've Got Potential, And Once You Really Grasp This, You'll Do Fine...