http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115158

basically village pimp lacked rhyme scheme, flow and everything else that makes a good rap battle. structure on that was terrible. I had to read it twice to catch the rhyme scheme.
I don't need to name my self Rapid Fire, Cuz I already spit 300 miles an hour//
Village Pimp murda you down to the wire, I'm 'bout to spit shit that'll set YOU on fire//
5, 10, 50 lines I rip you, Then after that I could still gash your whole crew//
Dude, what fucks wrong with you, ready for this battle bitch that ain't true//
All you're rapidly firein' is bullshit, The only way you could win is if you bit//
Cuz I'm Kansas City's own undefeated, Only way I lose here is if I get cheated//
And you know your screwed when I'm heated, Cuz I'm fuckin' lyrically burning everyone's ass// (((((where is the rhyme to this)))))
the use of fire and you in two lines back to back terrible.
Rapid fire actually had a flow to his verse. and despite what was previously posted, i liked the YMCA joke. nice close
vote to rapid fire
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115158