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Old 02-18-04, 06:55 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Oakley
Celestial
Try’d to TAG along…
…..but skill is a bump in the road n his car broke down
Cuz kid face it..
...even if ya voting ring was back u couldnt win this now
2 personals = 8
If lying is dope? well then be honest, u always been true
watch me take V..&..V...
….attach those two toghether & ill take that letter too!
wordplay,punch = 8
Chump change like poverty pay checks, wack lyrics = worthless
Please..when my piles itch is only time u scratch my surface
multi,wordplay,punch =8
Homicide done wit eas.. left on the ground like carpet flees
Strip this imitation faster than 5 year old boys...
....playing with Fake Barbies
-flo = 5
supposed to learn from mistakes...
..........but look at ya sig, u back at it agian now
& play time is over...
....so say bye bye to IJL cuz u just got kicked out!
personal, lost me wit the flo = 6

total = 45
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lyric
Every Crew your in self destructs, First D.O.I. and now Wits End's delirious
Celesial lost his Dialect, Even Verbal Kent said yall can't contend serious
personal,personal = 7
Celestial I dun Envy your Skillz, in fact none of ya aliases do
Had to battle Chrit as Slik Shadow, just so he'd aknowledge you
personal,-wrong = 6
You think your a Celestial being? Get ya head outta da clouds ya fake
Cause with the whackness you come with...
...Got declined from the gates for heaven's sake
ok.bad ending. = 7
You aint talented linguistically cause you literally shot ya mouth off
No ability to talk...
...I de-feeted you so you can't walk the walk
weird = 6
Your flow and spits off...coming with nothing but played ass rhymes
Cause only fuckin reatards...
...Shoot for the moon, but get sonned all the time
-played,-played = 5

total =31

nice battle vote = celestial


..Well this pretty much rounds it up.
Both where pretty much equal, BUT..
Celestial came slightly wittier & i think that made for better punches.
I like some of his ideas, concepts... & he just had some ok punches, personals.
Lyric came pretty plain.. not bad...but just a little..simple.
Some slightly played lines here & there..nothing major.
But i missed the wit...the humor u know..or anything that really made me react to ur verse... it was more like i was readin it..cause i was supposed to.
So i suggest next time u include that.. makes it more fun
But none the less.. pretty good verse.. but work on ^

vote Celestial