dis was a week battle...
Re$TricTed....not many punches,some were ok but others were jst week......flow was there in places....some lines didnt rhymes tho.....no structure...wordplay was there but needs work.......personals wernt there at all....overall...6/10..
Pa'ea ....no real punches and dats wot wins battles bro......once agen some lines didnt rhyme....no flow....bacis structure.....wordplay was elemetry.....personals were none...overall.....2.5/10.....very week...needs a lot of work bro....and stop using those smilies,kinda childish...no ofence...keep it up both of u.....
v/Re$TricTed

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