That was very interesting, I see that the song really goes with your name,

-We'll drift on da water/
We'll wave in da breeze/
So come take me now/
And do as chu please/
So ride it/
fuck me good/
You know the way you should-

I especially likw this part of your spit, it sounds really good, overall this rap is good, but I know you can improve on making your bars a lil longer like unfadeable said, other than that good job.