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Old 02-22-04, 01:16 PM   #7
Ambition
Flyweight
 
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From: Texas
IP:

Kareless took this easily...

Uben you could've added some multiz. Your verse was kinda of boring to me. Like this simple line was:

Uben:
cause i threw a few punches and diddnt even try/
you wanted to battle and when i replied i jus sighed//

I mean im not dissin you but you tryna hype everybody up and get us to think damn this other guy aint got no chance but when I read the post it wasnt horrible it was just average.

Kareless:
Your shit was straight to me I liked your first line it kinda tripped me out.

Sais U'r Poetic thats Pathetic..U'r lines need medicsand i aint clowning cuz your verse juss said-it
you suck Dicks lets jut forget-it..like sports? and playing with Balls, fuck i cant get off U'r Fetish

Even though the dissin people through sexuality is played... I still liked that line. You had a couple multiz I felt. I felt you got him more personally wit the lyrics...

V/ Kareless
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