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Old 02-22-04, 03:56 PM   #6
Ambition
Flyweight
 
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From: Texas
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Zeus:

Dawg your first was kinda simple guy. Your lines didnt catch me off guard they were aight.

- Challenging me was the first mistake-
- with my rhymes ill snap your neck in one lil break-
Man I mean you gotta say off the wall shit. Thats something a rookie that first started rappin would not a rookie on this site. No multiz. Besides I ahvent heard a tight West nigga in along time.

Hyberbole:
You had some pretty nice shit I thought.

Yeah you prolly can rhyme, but you winnin' is a boost gig]
Fuck a pen... words are comin' 'off the top' like 'loose wigs']
Disregard a truce kid... I'm the spittin' depiction of a hell's statue]
You gettin' hit with alphabet blocks...In other words I'm throwing L's At you]
You's a small brawl, dawg I done slammed vets]
He's scared to scuffle....'Hesitating' to 'BANG' like 'jammed techs']

Those lines in my opinion were ill as fuck. The word play was nice. No presonals thought but overall you took....

V/ Hyberbole
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