Newb Battle..

Ambition: 4/10
I dont understand what happen/
what kinda guy spends records where he rappin/
one of a kind nigga takin action/
the only way somebody would still rap from this fool/
is if they needed a piece of scratch paper to wipe the mud off they shoes/
my glocks will leave you snoring/
have you the number #1 reason....ya homies using they vodka for pouring/
its just that fuckin simple you'll get popped wit no warning/
dont think you run the fuckin streets because you jog in the morning/
kill so much I got a morge in my house/
you wanna live???...better shut it like you got doors in ya mouth/
cant wait to measure your pace/
he's a christian now but I bet you still aint doing better then Ma$e/
you dont wanna see the clutch and clip size/
the reason the post and raw is cause I aint worried whats gonna come against mine...
----Whole Spit Was Plain....No Texture Or Creativity----
------------------------4 For Trying--------------------------

D.J Em Sce: 5/10
i got stupid heat, but not the kind the friction makes when you beatin yo meat,
the kind that willl set flames upon yo tung when yo spittin to beats,
your obselete, the only way you'll be a victor is if your crowned in defeat,
i kill all m.cs on dees microphones,
i'll kill you repeatidly like physco clones,
i spit cuurents, and your rymes dont even flow,
be the end of this rap i'll get yo ass runin lilke your nose,
i was hungry until i just ate you up,
now im stuffed like the crust that they serve at pizza hut
----You Had Some Creativity In Your Spit. You Need To Work On Multis and Metaphors. Better Punches and Vocab-
--------------------5 For Effort------------------------------


Sorry Ambition But He Just Came Hotter...It's All Good For Newbs Though...

~R~