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Old 02-26-04, 02:45 PM   #5
FroXen
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You May Have Won Alot In The Past But I Hope Your Focused To Win This...
The Only W Youll Get Is From Making The Voters Loose Interest//

Not Yet A Vet So Dont Front Like Your Lines Are The Best...
Their Harder To Follow Then The Ones Drunks Walk For Sobriety Tests//

Your Verse Has No Kind Of Structure And Your Rhyme Layout Needs Some Rest...
Maybe Thats The Reason Why Your Whole Drop Reminds Me Of A Lazy Architect//

If A Victory Is On Your Mind Simply Forget It And Stop With The Small Talk...
Because Ive Outlined Your Whole Future And The Topics Are All Chalk//

Our Records Are Even But Your Fames Sinkin And Im Quick To Counter Punches...
I Wont Call You Poor White Trash Because Even Thats Out Of Your Budget//

I Dont Know Much About You But Siriusly Im Gonna Win And You Wont...
When It Comes To The Talent I See Rumor Has It But You Dont//


little keystyle for this n00b

ready for voters
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