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Flyweight
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IP:
X, honkies was sayin how your bars are like empty ziploc bags, dey lack hits...i hate ta see ya try to match wits with diss cause my rap fits result in raspy spits and clenched fists...ya spill hate, but i eat it like beef, rap teeth lacerate u like fat chicks on coral reefs...ya spits it like invoices, they come padded, they cum flatted with no hype added...first ta spit, preemptin any chance that ya hit, alright bitch, bring it, lets see what ya bit...
not a bad verse great pouchlines and metas
yiou could qwork on your structure so you can get a flow goin
if you add a few more lines it would have equaled to a bigger chance of winning
over all keep elevating
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You May Have Won Alot In The Past But I Hope Your Focused To Win This...
The Only W Youll Get Is From Making The Voters Loose Interest//
good intro
Not Yet A Vet So Dont Front Like Your Lines Are The Best...
Their Harder To Follow Then The Ones Drunks Walk For Sobriety Tests//
good werd laying in her nuice pounchline
Your Verse Has No Kind Of Structure And Your Rhyme Layout Needs Some Rest...
Maybe Thats The Reason Why Your Whole Drop Reminds Me Of A Lazy Architect//
lol...nice personals and pouchlines to follow thru and good meta
If A Victory Is On Your Mind Simply Forget It And Stop With The Small Talk...
Because Ive Outlined Your Whole Future And The Topics Are All Chalk//
ok verse still keeping it strong
Our Records Are Even But Your Fames Sinkin And Im Quick To Counter Punches...
I Wont Call You Poor White Trash Because Even Thats Out Of Your Budget//
thats low strong rascial comment
I Dont Know Much About You But Siriusly Im Gonna Win And You Wont...
When It Comes To The Talent I See Rumor Has It But You Dont//
well this was most definitalty a stronger verse with strong personal and pouchlines
but cut the rascial comments dawg
vote
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