Lyrical:

DaRoQ drops lame punches like jako crunches on childrens penis,

sick, but funny

He's a newb wona-b Mc wid dashed hopes of an extremist,

dope

But Lyricals Rhymes are the leanest,one of Rapbattle.com's Cleanst MC's,

pretty good

DaRoQ catchin hostiliyes wid rhymes makin' good off will smith CD's,
DaRoQ clutches da mic and chokes at da site of Lyricals onslaut,

too third person

Facin' Lyrical's lyric court, DaRoQ could'nt drop a line if there was double the gravity,

basketball court?

Lyrical MC's Rhymes scoldin ur mouth like a throbing tooth cavity,
But DaRoQ gettin' merkeb by MC's is just a formality,
DaRoQ new boy on da block,expressin'and perswadin' he's "dope",
but DaRoQ so far away from hostin' mic cred, beta pass him a telescope,!!

out of these, i only liked the "formality" line

i think u said "Daroq" too many times.

Daroq:

Im reading the newest issue of High Times while I write these new rhymes/

no follow up, b/c it needs a punchline or reference

When I spit lines their War crimes fillin you with destructive signs/
Cuz my opponent Lyrical MC is whack like speaking mimes/
The higher the prize the higher I climb/
The only way you’ll win is if our voters are blind/
Some of the herbs get served with no effort/
Ya head gets knocked around then severed/

pretty good last 2 line, but a little short on syntax, too prose style

My lyrics are vicious and dangerous ya head will need stitchin/
Wondering why I act outrageous? Cuz you won’t stop bitchin/
Lyrical MC, yeah rite, let’s see how hard you can be/
By showin me your lyrical lines that proves you’re not a fake ass wannabe/
Cuz from that shit you just wrote I didn’t feel like you were tryin to diss me/
You gonna walk away from this battle crying, bitch I ain't lying/
Blaming the Visine and I wasn’t even trying/

pretty good overall, but not really feelin any one part really strong.

vote: lyrical mc, got closer to bein dope and had a laugh

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