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Old 02-26-04, 08:19 PM   #15
FroXen
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lyrical

flow wasnt there and alot of spelling mistakes. try to type a little more formal because shortening words makes shit choppy. a couple nice lines and mentioned his name alot. not bad


darooq

i dont care what your reading man just fuckin throw punches. you need to attack your opponent alot more. this isnt a song its a battle. you need alot of work


vote- lyrical
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