Decent Battle For NoObs..

Kingz: 4/10
Aiyyo, killaconcepz I gotta concept for ya/
You flow is so shit, I don’t blame da crowd when they ignore ya/
--Weak Punch--Not A Good Opener---
Listen to wot I say, don’t lose ya focus/
Cos like Mose’s 8th plague, I’ll attack u like locusts /
--This Punch Could've Been Sick, But You Worded It Wrong--
You spit like ur new to this game, ur a virgin killaconcepz/
Ur like a teenage virgin, we all kno ya want sex/
--Again, Could've Been Better If Worded Properly--
Ya got lightweight next to ya name, it decribes u in one word/
One punch from me and ya vision be blurred/
--Decent--
Make no mistake im a heavyweight, ur a fake/
I punch bigga than nigga Tyson in round eight/
--Weak--
I hit ya chin, u hit the mat homie/
Ur lights are out, u aint comin back homie/
--Would Work For A Song--
You say that ur represent the streets of Connecticut/
Ya flows are shit, they bout as healthy as a cigarette butt/
--Didn't Even Ryhme---Makes Me Sick---
Your mum is begging to fuck me, she down on all fours/
Her pussy so hairy, it must be breaking some of president ‘bushes’ laws/
---Weak---
She needs to be shaven before I fuck her in your bed/
I want less hairs down there than Michael Jordan’s forehead/
--LoL, I Laughed But Could've Been Worded Better--
I bet ya wish ya never bitchslap someone u gonna lose to/
I get ya mamma to spank ya like she used to
--Weak Ending--

You Need To Elevate Your Vocab, Multies, Metaphors, and Word Usage. You Got The Right Ideas, But You Need Grammar Work..

KillaConceptz: 5/10
S-I-K-E
follow instructions-cuz ur on a path to destruction-bang on ur eardrum like i was advanced in percussion
concepz-u ain't touchin'-and that's the end of discussion
--Decent Opener--
try what can cuz ya flow won't ever get to me
even if they made u a dictionary ya words still won't mean shit to me
--Decent--
fuckin' noob just quit while ur ahead
only 4 post-
MY FAULT THEN UR BASICALLY DEAD
--Weak As Shit--
fucked gettin' checked u'll get ur reality froze
wit' flows so tight i'll leave ya brain leakin' from ya nose
--Need Better Usage Of Words--
Make change of this bitch and throw a quarterback like MATT STOVER
so go into ur sandbox cuz kid......THE GAME'S OVER
--Aight, But Could've Been Better--

Same As Kingz You Need Better Multis, Metaphors, Vocab, and Word Usuage...

V=Killaconceptz, because of better flow, and he is just about Kingz's skill..

~R~