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Old 02-28-04, 10:44 AM   #20
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This battle is ok......ummm.........wasn't to much skill, but it was funny.........riff raff....your verse did make me chuckle a lil.....but I think that you overused multies in your intro, which caused your verse to choppy........and you could have put stronger punches in there also.........verse=4.5/10

LOT, I don't think that your multies were strong enough. Though you had some, they didn't make an impact on your verse(if that makes sense). YOu also put punches in there, but they wasn't all that stronger either......but the upside to this is that your verse had better flow.......verse=4/10

P.S. Don't sleep............................

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