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Old 02-28-04, 01:31 PM   #35
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my texts cause 'carnage', to re-evalute his short RB career,
leave him to salvage his record, fuck him up like gonnerea,

good opener original, pounch and aight vocab

his birthday non applicable, like this cat dosent even exist,
my eat steam your eyes up, leave you lookin through mist,

good personal in there with pouch

got more characters in his name, than a warner bros animation,
i take this cat shaolin style, a mortal kombat, total anhiliation,

good vocab usage and personal=pounch also

the only warning he contain, is not to let him near you children,(avy)
slap his sig backwards,, because it was the devil, who served HIM,(sig)

lol....great personal and good pounch

you got 10 lines of filler, you must be able to patch up 'concrete' walls now,
no 'base' to ya stucture, the outcome of u winnin, will provoke the question how??

fuckin origanil and great finisher
this verse had great concept enjoyed and laughed through your personal and pouncheds
you also great metas and exaclt vocab keep it up

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You Atack?.....You "Hit Wack"! You Spit, Miss n Get "Bitch-Slapped"!/
Cuz "Bringin Cerial Back In Time" Is The Only Way Ull Get Ur "TRIX-PAST"!!!/..ouch!!..lol

nice opener stronger harder pounchs, metas, and werdplay

14-13 ..weak..lol Kid I Bring "Weaponry To Batles", I Guess You Can Say I "Glock-The-Thread"/
But Following a "STEET SIGN" Would Be The Only Way For You To "STOP-A-HEAD"!!(Ahead)/..lol

personals and pounches and keepin metas stronge

Im The "Shady-Type", That Got "Tonz Of Gunz" That "Make-Me-Hype"/
Callin yoself double-0 seven Your Fake Ass "STORE'S More Fictioness CLIPS" Then "8 Crazy-Nights"!!!/...haha

lol....personal and pouches was aight

'god is my judge'...god wont have yo Bac CUz You Lack-Text, Plus Ya Got Sad Assets, All Ya Rb Winz Are Like "Recently Walkin Threw Camp Grounds", "Just Past-Tents"(Tence)/
I Grab-Vets Like Ass, n Thrash-Sets, Like Ya "Showing Us How To Digest Change", We Wood Have "Understood Ur Abb-Cents"(Absence)/..lol

lol....better finisher with personal and pounches
this verse has my vote for an overall betta personals and pounches
great metas and werdplay you really had him goin

my vote ~©Ã®Ñåg€~

check sig and vote on that battle honest votes

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