ill cut you with a razorblade infected with hiv and watch you bleed from ya belly button down to your ankles/you a newb and you still suck,duck run and shoot/you cant touch my crew/i dont have one so im by myself/your life is in danger watch your health/15 bars i meant half of one how you gone battle me im the choosen one.

Ok for one... No structure. For two How does this make sense?"you cant touch my crew/i dont have one so im by myself" Weak ass verse man... Elevate much if you want to have a strong left side...Wins that is

ill take your own razorblade and cut out your stamina/
cutting up your soul like the medical examiner/
nike check on your head having your face meet asphalt/
you lost another battle now that was your ass fault/
you thought this was an easy win but you still at zero/
what would you expect as micheal jackson as your hero/
your verse is boring ill retire you like JORDAN/
youll get merked like jam master JAY/
this was like the easiest battle ive ever had on rb till this day.

It wasn't good. Like you said it was simple. But def. enough to beat the kid that used the razorblade thing in his verse in two different battles. Better structure... And pretty much it weak everything else, but enough to be nothing right

Vote DatBoyJay