I agree with you Liquor, Weaak!

Lman_1528's Verse:
Ummmm...."u now those ryhmes at yours but i ain't one 2 tattle but just make sure u keep that in mind next time u try 2 rap battle//
i am only doing 8 lines 2 give u a better chance dan an ape on weed da color of da ripiest grapes//". I don't understand! I dont know if its your style I'm not feeling or your vocab I'm not seeing. But for some reason I think both. You started off OK, but fell off tha edge of tha cliff, and killed yourself, at tha end.

Murderin Tha Inc:
Ummmm..Ok..What was that? You didn't follow tha rules, you had no punches, nor any style. If your planning on 'Murderin Tha Inc.', I advise you to use a gun cos' ya raps won't work.

Overall:
Both were lackin style, meta, vocab, punches, name it.
I felt Lman_1528's Verses took this battle more serious than Murderin Tha Umm...

My Vote: Lman_1528's Verses

Tips:
Work on ya vocabs. Make sure they're wrote in a way for viewers could read and understand your style.
For example;
//This is one of tha worsest battle/ I've ever seen/
Since ya'll both are wack/ Ya better off "Workin" as a team/

HaHa! Just thought I say that!
Ok, I'm Back!

Do You. It's better to find your own style than trying to come with none at all.
Keep on seeking more battles to elevate ya'll skill.

I'm Dat Nigga, Hiest! Holla!

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ThaDayWalkaz

Ya'll Niggaz Screamin Battle~But You Don't Want War