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IP:
I think both verses came hard... Both had good punches and lines that stood out... Lines from poetic that stood out...
Believe me it's easy, kid - you're feenin to see the end - but I'm only "throwing up jokes" like bulemic Comedians!/
I'm fortified for your demise, so come forth and die - coz I'm the best thing at "R.B.'s" since the curly fries! (Arby's)/
Thought they were both funny.
And Butchas lines...
How You Come 2 Rip Da Butcha And Bring A Plastic Knife/
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This Niggas Poetic Tendency Is Singin In Tha Shower/
Pretty funny also.
Thought, And butcha ya need to work on this... If ya did ya verses would be sick. You need to make sure ya lines rhyme..
Vote goes to Poetic
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