man honestly, woznt too great...i think ya lil bro flowed better than u, lyrics were kinda shit no offence dawg u need some work.

tha remix woz .... poor too sorry. tha lyrics were aiight. u definetly need a lotta work on ya flow..definetly cuz. towards tha end u got better but still needs work. tha volume changed throughout tha whole thang so work on consitency

listening to heaven sent now ... u need to up tha volume of ya voice. tha flow is definetly kinda betta than tha others. dun like how u pause from ya rappin. try n hav a chorus. tha beats aiight.
keep working on ya self. u seem to hav potential but u need a lotta work. gud stuff but..
peace

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