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Old 03-05-04, 03:23 PM   #11
M&rk
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contemporary american thug poet, spit so fast da mods tellin me 30 second befo i can show it...
~~~pretty hot verse decent worthy of bein an opener
you about to blow it cuz i'ma mow it and chop down yo rhymes so i can flow it...
my rhymes so hot again you couldnt win if yo was stealin battle documents from eminem...
~~~good flow, biggining gay but good finish punch
then again if you sucked him off and battled me twice at once, i'd roll you both up and smoke you like PHILLY blunts...
enygma realize my rhymes are lyricall enyma's, leave ya shitten on ya self spit a hex on ya...
~~~shit on himself honestly, not much of a punch but humer goes a lil ways
by a dictionary, spit every rhyme you aint standin my itinterary, you comitten hari kari cuz my rhymes like halloween just so fuckin scary...
~~~kill himself like harry carry and decent multi, but not much of a finisher

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I ain’t gotta drop intense, Just use some common sense/
This dude is brand new, The fuck you accomplishin?/
~~~nice flow but not really a punch
Yo, I’m back in action, so step back I’m clappin/
You must be in the Army cause it seems your rhymes are rationed/
~~~that whole line was retarded and didnt make sence...didnt' like it
You look appalled and disgusted, in awe of the spit I busted/
So how you gonna be straight spittin wit all of that dick you suckin?/
~~~decent multi but gay lines are too played
I don’t know which flows worse, backed up toilets or yo verse/
And your rhymes are like welfare recipients …… They don’t work/
~~~best line in the battle, original
So stop spewing, rapping is something you’re no doing/
Cause the best spit that you ever spat was HOCK TOOEEY/
~~~dont like the topic enough shouldnt stayed on it, and that hock tooeey line is original but wicked fuckin gay
~~~I can rhyme wit the vets, You won’t survive, who got next?/
Of course you got murdered………
……….CHECK OUT THE SIZE OF MY TECHS/(text)
nice word play decent finisher nice originality

originality-enygma
stucture-enygma other cats aint very good
flow-enygma
punches-accomplishment
havin fags ride your dick who cant even vote-enygma

vote- accomplishment for punches and and not getting the havin fags ride your dick who cant even vote vote
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