Grim came with a real smooth, natural flow. A couple of his punches were soft ("really sharp paper", "kicked out of cooking school"), but on the whole he displayed a lot of confidence and put out a pretty solid verse.

Butcha had the more devastating punches, but it was a mixed bag. The first line was promising but then the second was deflated. His flow was all over the place, so it sometimes read more like a spoken word than a rap over a beat. Some really good rhymes were offset by others that didn't really work, like "rude on da mic / losin' ain't mine". It all averages out to be a good verse but not a great one. Butcha's high points were higher than G.Deuce's but his low points were also lower.

It's a tough call, and I still don't have enough posts to vote anyways. But I think I'd give this one to Butcha by a hair, just on the basis of the greater creativity of his disses. Nice work y'all.