Ayo, I'm new in here too and only got one battle so far. Check it out and let me know what ya think...........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115809

You can check these freestyles too if ya want........
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...9&page=10&pp=15
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...18&page=6&pp=15