Duece..........you need to work on your verse structure, cause I couldn't really get into your verse because it was structured poorly......I couldn't really decipher your punches and etc. to give you an accurate feedback..............2/10

Butcha.......your verse was structured pretty good....but your punch was weak......you used alot of quotations, but didn't have any wordplay..........that's what quotations are used for......also your verse was too long and extended.....you should have compacted it, and it would have given it more of a punch........the more I read, I was like "am I done yet"...........but your verse was clearly better and more complex....but just work on your skills, and polish them up, and you could be pretty nice........5/10