DJ....your verse was kinda weak......you needed more punches....and you need to extend your lead lines........also use "/" instead of commas....it helps the structures....commas make you read like the verse like a run-on sentence........feel me.....2.5/10

Butcha......again I like your structure......I also like the bold more than the quotations, but you overused them........either used the bold for wordplay.....or at the end of punchlines, because the bold makes the punches stand out.......4.5/10