Yeah Halob.....you came kinda weak on this verse.........make sure you continue to work on your bar structure....and verse structure, and then your other skills will follow............2.5/10

Lil rip...your verse wasn't too much better, but it was better.....you have an ok verse struture, but it still needs work.....just work on making your punches stronger....and workin on other aspects of battling beside just punchlines, such as multi's and wordplay.......4/10

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