Halob.....even though this verse was a little better....you need to take my advice and work on what I say you know.............when I battle again I'll show you...................same critiques as other battles................work on stronger punches cause these were kinda weak......and simple like

[QOUTE]yo, inspecta, i done inspected your wacky flows/
dud you suck just amited every body knows//[QUOTE]

I see you tried wordplay with his name.....but words like "wacky" ain't kool......so just keep workin aight................3.5/10

Inspecta.........your verse kinda had me confused.........I was tryin to follow it, but I kept getting lost......ya'll have to understand that verse structure is everything....if your verse isn't structered right, then people won't even care what you have to say.....so work on that, and the rest will follow...........1.5/10

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