yo man yall both was coo but slaughta got this 1....
slaughta: cool punch line the only one i dint like was the one where you had said
open twice to make ur two lines rhyme....but other than that ur punches
were coo keep practicin and comin hard bro........

pictureperfect2: yo man ur structure was coo but it was too simple for me man.
try workin on ur vocab and itll be all gravy from there....also
try to make ur punches hit harder..n..use better metas...but other
than that you did well...

BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTT,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
My vote= SlaughTa

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