Originally Posted by 168

verse by pedro

I giv these newb a word of warning… never test the ill
First Ur illiterate son, Secondly, U don’t have the skill
You’ll get run out of the site to the point U’ll be “exhumed”
N cos I ‘m posting ill, don’t run away jus cos U doomed
U From the former capital…But capital punishment is all U’ll gain
And Ur Claim 2 fame..”Kwiz beat me, another loss to My name!”
I’ve laid down my battle style…The Truth..U can’t come close
So delete Ur verse…Fuck it…honestly mate, DO NOT POST!
Listen kid…If you need style…Ur comin to the wrong place
…U can never be as weak as U and still last the pace!

good verse here
good pouches great metas and werdplay...but your finisher stunk
practice makes perfect so keep doin it


Mate! ok first of Yo shit is wack! You must be white cuz no black would say that! That ain't rap all that is is talk! You be like yo he killed me! GREAT SCOTT! Ain't that right wit my phat rhyme! Don't show me ya watch cuz bitch, i fuckin take time! But no yeah i'm stupid, i'm big headed! Would you please stop talkin bout how my dickhead is! Oh yeah by the way I post shit ill! On my way 15 and i'm making a kill! On yo punk ass yes yo punk ass! You just mad cuz i put this rap shit on Blast, but when you see me walk down a block! Please keep ya eyes off my cock!

very very weak you need much elevating
but you did have some good metas

vote pedro for a much stronger verse outta the two hit my battle up with an honest vote

peace