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Old 03-09-04, 05:27 PM   #6
Hattrick
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Guyver takes this.

Flow - Guyver, it was just easier to read. Em Sce, your lack of bars makes it not seem to flow very well.

Punches - em sce, ya had some good lines in that shit.

Personals - guyver had alot more, better comebacks, he got almost all ya lines...and were alot better, em sce, you didnt really have any of them. It sounded like it was Pre-Written :-x (no hate intended)

Multies - Guyver, without a doubt.

Vocab - em sce, ya had some nice words in there. Guyver's were good too, but em sces ya were better.

Originality - em sce, even though he had less of everything else, ya verse was pretty tight.


Good job both yall tho.
Guyver 1.
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