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Old 03-09-04, 05:28 PM   #10
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aight look dagreatest you was coo but you still in training but this was a coo dude to battle because he was on your level...but im lovin some of your lines like the bullied one...you need to practice on making mo of them and you need mo of a vocab....and the last liine was a coo way to end it..5/10

D.u you were coo but i wasnt feelin yo style but it was pretty coo kinda even...your rap was longer but it also took you alot longer...4 1/2 /10
i vote on yours now vote on some of mines

may the best man win...
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