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Old 03-09-04, 06:36 PM   #10
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Lil Rip....Your verse lacked structured, and structure is a key concept in netcee battling, cause the reader wants to flow through your verse..........work on that, and the reast will follow............2.5/10

SnypeR......You mad nice...........your verse was straight to the point........and I like the way you put flow in that short verse...nice.......But I've 100 times better from you.............6/10