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Old 03-09-04, 10:25 PM   #7
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Enygma.....that snyper, diaper line is play.............you need to work on makin your verse more complex....you have nice structure, and ok flow...one of the better verses I've read..........4.5/10

Snyper....your verse was one of the nicest I've read on here....you were clearly on another level...........

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Enygma.. I make liers out of Enimies who claim their "Bars-Are-Sick"/
Cause like "Actors-on-Strike" you shouldnt want any "Part-In-This"/


that was sick...............7.5/10