I'm a break it down...

this kid im battling's name is liquor of tears
but his flow is about as hard as tears for fears

Not a bad punch

so im gonna shout,shout, let it all out
my rhymes is deadly, man, there's no doubt

Weak

all liquor's packin is straight rubber
i leave him so broke, he'll be eatin his mother's blubber

Average

at the end of this rhyme, ill leave u like ur name implies, in tears
u prolly wanna stick a gerbil in ur ass like richard gere

Liked this!!!^^^good humour

we from the same state, but u givin new york a bad name
with ur lame ass style, u should be bowing ur head in shame

Couldve come harder

man, u know my freestyles always stay off the wall
liquor of tears rapping is like jordan playin baseball

Played out line, but ok

but he ain't got no other sport to fall back on
this scrub is talentless, thats why i get my crack on

Sorry?

spittin vicious rhymes that will leave u decapitated
liquor would prolly still be a virgin, had he not masturbated

He he, good finisher

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Liqour break down...

Even if this kid wrote my biography, he couldn't come up with anything personal/
He could rhyme about Piccaso's paintings, and he still couldn't write abstractional/

Not bad, nice style

This kid gangsta? His mom won't even let him carry a super soaker/
Dont brag about girls, the only time you can play it straight is during a game of poker./

Nice punch

If our words were ranked on the drug scale mine would be grade A,/
Addiction to my rhymes leave ya sittin in an institution with nothing to say/

Good, couldve come harder

But its too bad it aint graded like tits,yours is down in the c's and d's/
which means the only addiction you give.Is to 10 year old kids like inhalants and amphetamines/

Good punch

You a coward and soft like 'gizmo', yet you persist on callin your self a Gremlin?/(the movie Gremlins)

Ok

Think you can play mind games, But you couldn't 'get inside me' if you was 'my surgeon'/
Your Verse couldn't go anywhere fast if you mailed it across the world and labeled it Extremley Urgent/

Nice finisher


Not a bad battle, in my opinion youve both got a long way to go but Liquor definitely took this.

Would appreciate some votes/feedback in my battles plz!!!

Safe

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