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Old 03-10-04, 04:40 PM   #14
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yawn
 
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there were a lot of things in du's that i thought was wack as fuck... like saying whack.... 3 times? Well anyways, since he had better word play and punches ima give it to him..

But dagreatest... Try and astructure your shit more, Dont use so many /'s. Make your lines longer and work on your wordplay and metas. If you get that down then you'll be good, cause your not to bad at rhymin.
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