Umm MC your verse was one of the better one's I have seen on here.....I didn't understand some of your punches though....like
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aright yo i flow nonstop like a motherfucken radio
you rhyme like a scratched cd, so for you its not ~ok to flow~
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^^^^Punchline didn't make sense like that.................
Like this
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ayo everytime i drop shit its hott bitch, like the tropics
bet lets NOT get off the topic, your ~not shit~
you got that? im crazier than that CAT wit the ~top hat~
like an anarexic your NOT PHAT, damn right i ~drop hot raps~!!
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^^^pretty sick man...................nice multies................verse......7.5/10
Snyper...........your verse was constant fire...............
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i dont need-gatz,belive my text will simply leave you with your knees-capped/
i kno your "asian", so you mean it litteral when you say you "eat-cats"/
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^^^^that was a crazy opener........didn't think that you could keep you verse that strong throughout............................then I read...........
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he wont do "big things" if he had a "dick pump", confessing-his-mind-state/
the time awaits, mcCRACKEN never seen who he's messing with, like a contestant-on-blind-date/
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^^^^Crazy nice man................8.5/10
MC...your verse started out weak, but ended strong...........while SnypeR's verse was strong throughout............